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the dark illumination,
a faceless lover.
completely flavorless,
all black and white.
flashes of beauty,
a butterfly of wonder,
I smile and realize,
I see it all,
when my eyes are closed...
©2005-2009 ~aphoristicstatic
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A quick little poem written about a dream I had during what most people would consider a rough patch in my life. It helped me through the toughest month of my life thinking and dreaming with this thought, telling me it will all get better, and even if everything is faceless, to find love in even the darkest scenarios

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Yes, a dream of any sort often brings optimism. Sometimes it's the only thing we have to hold on to in a hard time. I think this is beautiful. You used nine lines to convey your point well. There really is no need to add filler sometimes. It was simple and to the point therefore bringing it a beauty of its own. I'm glad I had the description though. I might not have gotten it without it. A poem means so much more to me if I know what it means rather than just flipping through a random poetry book.
"a butterfly of wonder" That is my favorite line. I love the imagery it brings to mind. Quite beautiful.

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